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Worse Case Scenario

Lights come back on, did I blink, or did I die A screen or something resembling one, kind of firmament appears ahead I’m urged not forced, go take a walk through memories, images, echoes, familiar voices, flicker all around This was my life, must be over now, over and done Could this be judgment day, or another weird dream Just then, a broken child comes along, Now let’s see, I’m you, your me, We’re the same but different, changed by time Hey he says, you remember that time, falling from the big tree on holiday want to watch it again, Sure why not, wasn’t that bad But this time, I don’t get back up My parents are crying frantically and I’m not breathing Yeah I died that day, says the child No I got back up, bloodied and bruised, I tell my younger self not in my timeline I’m afraid, This is an alternate reality You mean I died, and dreamt my whole life in some kind of coma, No every eventuality that could have happened, does happen Welcome to infinity Welcome to behind deaths membrane Hello! here comes another me along, I’m a teenager and there’s an axe buried in my head I could never figure out, how that bastard missed. By David Kavanagh

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Date: 5/23/2021 9:10:00 AM
David, did you have a nightmare or an experience that prompted these lines? They're so very dismal, but profoundly exposed. Well done.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 5/23/2021 11:19:00 AM
No nightmare Jenna, this is a trip down the infinity universe route, into it’s inevitable conclusion, that any and every eventuality, can and will happen, I’ve had some brushes with death over my lifetime, this is just an alternative outcome, that so easily could’ve played out, 1 second or 1 inch either way, but hey it’s just a poem I think, cheers David
Date: 5/22/2021 3:52:00 PM
What awesome and strong symbolism and imagination! Consequently, David, you seemed happier thinking that you would see Judgement Day anyway and was much more secure in his next dream as a result. We'll bear that in mind. However, things happen that weren't planned, which is why we like taking the ax of the head and living our lives fully.
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Date: 5/23/2021 1:03:00 AM
Thank you Lasaad upon pondering the near misses and close shaves I’ve had in life, got me thinking about infinity and the deadly consequences of taking a left or right turn to reach a certain destination, or indeed any minute decision we make, changing life’s outcome, a stretch of the imagination perhaps, but one the concept of an infinite universe brings, cheers David

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