Worn-Out Dreams

worn-out dreams and briny tears hung upon the moon sorely borne from long-held fears they lit the night of June with silvered light of sour notes that echoed from her soul and fell as rain to lie in moats around the life he stole
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Bloomsfield Avatar
July 1, 2010 at 7:39 AM
Touching,very deep ,dear friend,Celene!
Knop Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 6:37 AM
So sad, so nicely written, Sharon! And thank you for your kind comments...:)..Gert
Dietrich Avatar
June 27, 2010 at 10:56 PM
Beautifully sad, Sharon. It must be about you! Break ups do that to a person! (inspire some great poetry, which is about all they are good for!) LUv, Andrea
Conway Avatar
June 27, 2010 at 9:39 PM
Wonderful Poem, Sharon! And you hit the nail on the head with my Moon poem! I was going for werewolf!~Tirzah~
Devonshire Avatar
June 27, 2010 at 6:00 PM
So sad, but beautifully written, Sharon. You are a true wordsmith. Love, Carolyn
Mitchell Avatar
June 27, 2010 at 4:55 PM
This is, indeed, beautiful! I put it to favorites, so I can read again. : )
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