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Worlds and Lovers

A Hollow moon sleeps Atop the calm sea water under a blanket of clouds Earth and moon rest as one soul awaiting grace from sunrise
beauty of the soul in uniting the two worlds is in shades of blue For all lovers to observe hearts will beat as one spirit
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kimathi Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 9:24 AM
Greetings Tom. I really enjoyed the screaming yet subtle imagery of your piece!!! ;-)
Austin Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 9:06 AM
Wonderful Tanka. Top notch imaging. Congrats on the selection. daver
Austin Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 9:11 AM
Missed your second Tanka. Wonderful meditation. daver
Brown Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 11:17 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Moonlight Dreams" contest Tom. Love, Carol
Puddifoot Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 5:26 PM
beautiful lines of love and tranquillity, congrats! :-)
Quigley Avatar
December 4, 2011 at 8:54 AM
Very nice lines Tom. Congratulations
Richards Avatar
December 3, 2011 at 1:31 PM
There is such a sense of peace in this lovely poem. Nicely done, Tom!
Dietrich Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 10:38 PM
I really really like how you did yours, Tom. good luck in the contest.
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