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A Hollow moon sleeps Atop the calm sea water under a blanket of clouds Earth and moon rest as one soul awaiting grace from sunrise
beauty of the soul in uniting the two worlds is in shades of blue For all lovers to observe hearts will beat as one spirit

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/18/2017 9:24:00 AM
Greetings Tom. I really enjoyed the screaming yet subtle imagery of your piece!!! ;-)
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Date: 1/18/2017 9:06:00 AM
Wonderful Tanka. Top notch imaging. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 1/18/2017 9:11:00 AM
Missed your second Tanka. Wonderful meditation. daver
Date: 12/6/2011 11:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Moonlight Dreams" contest Tom. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/5/2011 5:26:00 PM
beautiful lines of love and tranquillity, congrats! :-)
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Date: 12/4/2011 8:54:00 AM
Very nice lines Tom. Congratulations
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Date: 12/3/2011 1:31:00 PM
There is such a sense of peace in this lovely poem. Nicely done, Tom!
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Date: 11/30/2011 10:38:00 PM
I really really like how you did yours, Tom. good luck in the contest.
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