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World without War

In a world without war, the skies would sing, With melodies of peace, on gentle breeze they'd ring, No cannons roar, no swords clash in the night, Just harmony and love, under the tranquil moonlight. The children would play in meadows green and wide, Laughing freely, no fear or tears to hide, Their innocent hearts untouched by strife, Their dreams unbound, their spirits alive. The elders would share their wisdom and grace, Guiding with kindness, in this peaceful place, No borders to divide, no hatred to sow, Just unity and understanding, a shared glow. In a world without war, souls would soar high, Embracing diversity, reaching for the sky, Embracing each other in a warm embrace, Celebrating differences, finding common grace. A world without war, is a world we can create, With love as our guide, let peace radiate.

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Date: 3/5/2024 7:02:00 AM
A wonderful write Jeanine, without war the world would be everything you’ve said it could be… Beryl
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Jeanine Dejesus
Date: 3/6/2024 2:39:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words!
Date: 3/4/2024 6:46:00 PM
This is a wonderful contest entry! I love your descriptions! I too entered this contest but did not do as well as you did! Best wishes!
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Jeanine Dejesus
Date: 3/6/2024 2:48:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words. I read your poem and it was beautifully written. Each stanza was powerful and emotional. In a perfect world it would be true.
Date: 3/4/2024 6:16:00 PM
Dear Jeanine, this is a beautiful dream, a world painted with the colors of peace. The imagery of the singing skies and children playing freely is so powerful. It shows us what's at stake – a world where innocence thrives and dreams take flight. The poem doesn't shy away from the harsh realities of war, but it offers a hopeful alternative – unity, understanding, and a shared embrace of humanity's complexities. Jeanine this world peace is possible, and inspiring us to fight for it. blessings, Daniel
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Jeanine Dejesus
Date: 3/4/2024 6:21:00 PM
Thank you Daniel for your kind words.

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