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World Weirdness

People glower; horns get louder - I wonder why a drive so dour was ever termed rush hour. . Dollars followed by point 99 Are dollars with one more assigned. Retailers think shoppers math blind. Business phones in America evolved With English as option, not default, Like a blond joke saw phones solved. In the USA, I cannot afford to die So place my body atop funeral rates Until they pass sky for heaven-high. Halloween is marketed in July, Followed by Christmas in August – Greed's gone awry, I won't comply. Medical care doesn’t care at all, Should be re-termed medical gall As many are ill from medical appall. The law fits fine if one is rich, Others needing a justice hit Need a thief’s help to pay for it. Let me end my sad word hurl As born in my dramatic world: Hyperbole debris, reality decreed.
... CayCay Jennings February 12, 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/20/2017 11:55:00 AM
You describe an unfortunate situation quite vividly in this work. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 2/19/2017 8:35:00 PM
You describe our weird, fallen world so well, CayCay, with a hint of humor in there, as well! Well done and GL in the contest :)
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Date: 2/18/2017 10:33:00 AM
First rate poetry, CayCay. It's a mad, mad, mad, mad world, baby. World Weirdness is an appropriate title, dear. Wonderful scatter thought shots. Pure visceral poetry. I love how you blow off steam. Love and hugs to you.
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Date: 2/17/2017 9:39:00 AM
"What a wonderful world"...of the absurd that is...great write my friend...very uplifting...of the pockets lol...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 2/15/2017 2:05:00 PM
Beautifully written poem. Sadly, everything you wrote is true. Especially about the medical care. You did an excellent job of expressing life in America today.
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Date: 2/13/2017 6:23:00 AM
Like a sponge absorbing the last drops of water from the counter, your words strike at the heart of the absurdity of how we are often taken for granted. The bean counters of the world have come into their glory; You just reminded us of the story. Oh, just to go back to the days which were so simple would be like using a pair of pliers to pop a pimple. This is a great write, CayCay. And the cost to watch this theater is free each day!
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Date: 2/12/2017 8:34:00 PM
Well on a positive note, I would like to wish you Happy Thanksgiving!!!! :)
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Date: 2/12/2017 7:40:00 PM
You did this so well. Very entertaining write!
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Date: 2/12/2017 2:13:00 PM
EXCELLENT take on the theme., my friend, I LOVED it. But My absurd theater is even more absurd than this. hahaha. Yes, it felt good to write that thing though I was up half the night losing sleep. Can't wait to get mail from you!! SEVEN on this funny baby!
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Date: 2/12/2017 1:51:00 PM
I know what you mean Cay Cay. I work at WalMart and they are always displaying two seasons at a time. Right now Easter is vying with Valentine's Day for attention. But what really irks me is when Christmas has to fight with Halloween. They should do Hallowen at the end of Sept. and through Oct. and then do Christmas. SHEESH! Great Write. I Totally Agree. God Bless and thanks for the kind words on my Country Love Song. JB
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Date: 2/12/2017 12:00:00 PM
This truly takes the cake dear, CayCay! Good luck and a seven!
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Date: 2/12/2017 11:44:00 AM
So true! I hated when I was looking for a HALLOWEEN sweater in OCTOBER and could only find CHRISTMAS sweaters. Our world needs a readjustment! Nice work, CayCay!
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Date: 2/12/2017 10:56:00 AM
- Take from those who are "poor" ... give to those who are rich .... you know someone who has everything ... always wants more .... and still more - An interesting and very well written poem, CayCay - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/12/2017 10:21:00 AM
it may be theatre but its so sadly true CayCay humourous but sad intermingled - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/12/2017 9:35:00 AM
Whew 7+..I lmao in reflection of your piece cuz your words sound rediculous on paper...yet it is ALL of your insight is so very true...It is both scary and funny at the same time. Loved it :)peace, Jill
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