World We Can Be Proud Of

In splendor of meadows gentle winds blow
As traversing high-low mighty rivers flow
And sun never sets as blue skies ever glow--
Seasons bloom there, ample crops grow
And peaceful are domains where birds roam
Devoid of trepidation from famine or foe.

Frolic in playgrounds where children laugh,
Grown-ups always walk tranquil serene paths,
Intellect prevails as wisdom outlaws wars
And across oceans extend gallant helping hands
As enduring love fuels brotherhood at large.

Divine is fortitude of eight billion strong
From all faiths, colors, cultural backgrounds
Striving in unison for solemn human cause:
To rid of what divides--seek common ground.

We trade, we innovate, we build, we believe
We share, we live, let every nation be
We learn, we educate, respect one another
We argue, we listen, and confer with honor--

Such is global paradigm of model new world.

August 12, 2019
Placed 1st: Choose your own title, vol. 7-songs 
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh; Song: I believe-Era
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Crabtree Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 1:48 PM
The good old days... A magnificent write, Vijay :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 3:13 PM
Oh if only it could be so!! I see this got a first place win. A very big congrats to you on this one, though belated.
Pandit Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 4:35 PM
I know--just a dream--a wish! Thanks, Andrea.
Hamilton Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 9:20 PM
Wonderful write Vijay, one day it will be a reality! Paradise on earth...is coming soon!
Pandit Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 11:12 AM
We can dream..much appreciate John--always a delight to read your feedback..many thanks.
Sands Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 6:30 PM
Congratulations for your fabulous win Vijay :)
Pandit Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 11:12 AM
So kind of you..much appreciate Heidi--many thanks.
Ibeh Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 5:41 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest with this fabulous write, Vijay!:-) Wonderful message!
Pandit Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 11:11 AM
Much appreciate your vote of approval Edward..always a pleasure to read your feedback..many thanks.
Adams Avatar
August 16, 2019 at 9:57 PM
I think the world was a better place before our time... isn’t it a shame we can’t undo history and univent some Of the technology and live a more simple life, put things back the way they once were ... such a wonderful poem, great penning! Good luck in the contest :)hugs
Pandit Avatar
August 17, 2019 at 7:06 AM
Things were different indeed in good old days..much appreciate the time you took to write a detailed comment..much appreciate..many thanks, Sandra.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
August 16, 2019 at 11:03 AM
The deep beauty of your heart and mind.. the grace of your beliefs and values.. the fine poetry you master.. all have weaved a world the whole Humanity aspire to.. a world you made possible in the reality of words! In the depth of hearts and in the beauty of minds! So much pleased to read such illuminated and illuminating poetry! Definitely in my fave list, dear Vijay, as it is a gem! My deepest regards and blessings.
Pandit Avatar
August 16, 2019 at 4:38 PM
Isn't it nice to at least dream of an ideal world..all big things begin with a dream. While this poem is an interpretation of the contest song...the world is capable of achieving greatness. As always, your analytical prowess shines my friend..much appreciate Besma--many thanks. And a special thank you for the FAVE. God bless! Regards!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 2:28 PM
If only...a world I hope to see happen one day before I die. This is the harmony we all should be living. Beautiful Vijay! : ) xxoo
Pandit Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 3:21 PM
I agree..so hard to even imagine..but in keeping with the spirit of the song..much appreciate your visit and comments Connie..many thanks.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 2:32 PM
We can learn to love each other. We must...
Pandit Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 7:13 AM
Many thanks Kim--much appreciate.
Onclaud Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 1:18 PM
despite our world's troubles, you manage to uplift me with this splendid piece, vijay... rally on and huggs
Pandit Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 2:29 PM
In keeping with the spirit of the contest song..much appreciate, Nette..many thanks.
Vangaveti Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 5:52 AM
Wah!! I wish this happens to be true one day!! Wonderful vision.
Pandit Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 7:56 AM
I am wishing with you for this to be true one day. Much appreciate Swetha..many many thanks.
Kannan Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 4:49 AM
Such a wonderful poetry with very beautiful message. Loved your vision on new world.
Pandit Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 7:54 AM
Glad you liked it Supraja..I must admit..it is only possible to dream in poetry. Much appreciate..many thanks.
Romios Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 3:37 AM
I have all the hope. Once man stops thinking he is God himself and can fix all things. Once man thinks "he" can get his claws off the each other, animals, seas,metcola. We will do fine, Don't people know this world has an end date? It was not created to be a utopia. That's why we are so lost Regardless, a great poem. Panagiota R
Pandit Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 7:53 AM
Much appreciate your wonderful, analytical assessment Panagiota. Hope is a great motivator for humanity.. to self-correct. Many thanks for your visit and comments.
Rose  Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 8:23 PM
We are a great big beautiful world Vij, united we stand, and separate we fall. Nice write, xo
Pandit Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 7:50 AM
Yes--indeed--the world is beautiful and magnificent. It needs every citizen to be like you to bring about harmony. Much appreciate your thoughts, Pixie--many thanks.
Nicole Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 7:22 PM
Within the heart, it truly feels like there is No Hope!! Sometimes, I imagine such a place, a place like the one you have so beautifully painted. In Truth, we are surrounded by most!! "blue skies ever glow-- Seasons bloom there, ample crops grow" :) Perhaps moments aren't always like this. Yet, I smile because they are this way. And- I can embrace each one. Your thoughts always move me. ~ Brandy
Pandit Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 7:47 AM
Yes--it sure feels like there is no hope..your analysis is on mark, as always. When in winter..spring is the theme of every dream. Much appreciate, Brandy..your support is so valued. Many thanks.
Andresen Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 1:55 PM
- A picture of our world ... that we all want ... unfortunately I just think it's a lovely dream, Vijay - Humans have learned to hate, fight and kill - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 7:45 AM
So true and on point Anne-Lise..much appreciate your visit, as always..many thanks.
Cunningham Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 8:48 AM
Great vision Vijay on how things should be and most of us just want it that way. But first we need to get rid of prejudice, hatred and war.
Pandit Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 7:42 AM
So true my friend--odds are against us--but anything is possible in dreams of poets. Much appreciate..many thanks.
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