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World through my eyes

When you turn around, There's nothing to see, But the sorrowness and the pain, That made me the strongest and powerful I can be. When I reached here, They have forgotten it there, All alone in this dark sky, Nothing but a single star to see. I have always wondered, If they knew it's there, It is not meant to be, Sitting all alone in this lonely sea. Sometimes gets noticed by everyone And one day by only one, One day it may disappear, Leaving no traces it was there. And let me tell you now, That this is the story how, Some people disappear, From this lonely depressing world. You might have realised it now, That many people don't know how, Some end up being like the star, Disappearing in this lonely car.

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Date: 8/15/2024 1:34:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 8/12/2024 11:58:00 AM
You write very well.. this has a great flow to it..
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Date: 8/12/2024 5:25:00 AM
I'm sorry if you're plagued by loneliness. Here a great big cyber hug!
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