World Stops Turning

The world stops turning.
When you smile at me
It fills me with glee.
So much doesn't need to be said
when you look at me. 
I'm hanging on a thread
Take me to bed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 14, 2014 at 11:49 PM
Sammi . Happy valentines, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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February 12, 2014 at 4:03 PM
Roses are red Violets are blue I like peanut butter Let's . . . I like the direction of your poem.
Chircop Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 1:58 PM
A very sweet poem..Keep writing and Welcome to poetrysoup site.
Walden Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 5:09 PM
Thank you x
A  Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 11:46 AM
Hi Sammi, wow.. Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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February 3, 2014 at 11:14 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Sammi- I choose your first cute written poem - hope you will write many more in the future :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Walden Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 11:58 AM
thank you x
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