World Peace With a Whirl

World Peace with a Whirl

What things make your mind start to spread?
Out and broaden while hearing what was said
Through the clammer and constant commotion
Mixed in with my love and much devotion.

When not prejudiced and unbiased you are
In all of the world, you will go infinitely far,
But if both are missing or lack one of these
This will prevent happiness caressed with world peace.

Don't take any of this lightly that I may say
For I hope soon there will come a day
When we will pray together on bended knees
And start reaping the rewards of world peace.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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August 21, 2014 at 5:11 AM
This poem might have been pretty deep for people to understand. That is probably the reason why I am not receiving any comments. I will not rate this poem being that it is my own. James Thomas Horn, Retired Veteran
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