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World of Trouble

I’ve got the weight Of the world of trouble Doubling onto me And taking over my conscience I feel the trouble And it hurts beyond What I have in the world It’s weighing on me And the trouble is horrible Completely surreal Seemingly unreal But very very true Trouble is in my world Russell Sivey

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Don Johnson

Date: 8/6/2011 6:19:00 AM

Sometimes the weight of the planet leans on you, And nothing works for sure, nothing works what er you do, then the parrot sheds his fur :) world of drama sometimes, touching poem mate, Don

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/5/2011 10:39:00 AM

must agree emphatically Russell as the world situation looks grave and it spills over into our personal lives.. an excellent write filled with emotion.. luv.. thankxx for your sweet critique of my poetry ..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/5/2011 3:01:00 AM

this is downright expressive and so REAL.. yet the images pull me in emotionally.. greeat stuff, russel... i'm a fan :) huggs, nette

Juanita Warden

Date: 8/5/2011 2:17:00 AM

I hope and pray you are ok..Good words written on troubles...hugs..jo..thanks for your comment tonight..