World of Demon Slayers

a vision of looking down on an empty planet
a planet that had only one citizen
a little red guy, trudging around quickly
in his three different forms
the child, the adult male, and the invisible self

Unknown to man whose crime this was
a plan to prove myself to the heavens
removed myself from every star
created a team

there they are inside the stars
wondering where i went
the heavens smiling upon us
as one by one through this unfortunate circumstance
they achieve their red eyes

The plan was perfect
a deceptive trick
with the lie we lived
of the two sides to the reason why
mankind has suffered for 10 000 years
and remains ignorant

you seriously do not want to know what you did
two sides of the team
the stage you undoubtedly live
the only way to kill him was to help him pull off his own devious tricks
he isn't there anymore, invisible
a sick sense of worship
all the angels earned their red eyes
they too forgetful of their crime upon mankind
a humbling lesson for earth to realise
why they are higher up on the scheme of things than some of those in the heavens

dejavous of round two
a planet now addicted
the world of demon slayers
the transformation
pidgeonholed by the only true citizen of the planet's
self righteous suicide

and you wonder why so many walk around clueless
when your ignorance is bliss
creation about to learn it's lesson
when undeniably in this situation there is no way to win

A world of demon slayers
ready to be forgiven for an unholy addiction
to prove myself missing from the heavens

your own starter packs of your personal hells
a world of demonslayers ready to appologise
all the angels with red eyes
this demon cannot be defeated unless you focus on doing the right thing
but will linger here toward your temptation
recovery from an unholy addiction
for now your ignorance is bliss
you seriously don't want to know what you did

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/1/2010 11:57:00 AM
Oh, kinda like a comic book lol, very cool write...P.D.
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