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World of Bubbles

have you seen the mermaid beauty
who swims down in the deep blue sea
never any troubles
in her world of bubbles
quite happy fancy and so free

she swims wherever she wishes
with seahorse whale and crayfishes
with sparkling raven hair
that just flows everywhere
chasing the fresh seafood dishes

Mermaids Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier
9/20/2019

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Date: 1/5/2020 10:54:00 AM
Peaceful and lovely imagery, Timothy. This is the part of judging I hate~ good poems inevitably get lost in the shuffle.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 1/5/2020 4:52:00 PM
There is nothing wrong with your judging. Not every poem is good enough to win.
Date: 10/23/2019 5:23:00 AM
I really enjoyed this one Timothy :-) x
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/23/2019 7:52:00 PM
Thank you Elaine
Date: 9/22/2019 6:28:00 PM
Seafood dishes Timothy! Crikey, I think I'm a mermaid - thank you Timothy - Lindsay
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/22/2019 9:53:00 PM
Do you have a flipper?
Date: 9/22/2019 2:46:00 PM
absolutely charming Timothy I love it:-) hugs Jan xx
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/22/2019 4:08:00 PM
Thanks again Jan :)

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