Timothy Mcguire Poet Limerick

World of Bubbles

have you seen the mermaid beauty
who swims down in the deep blue sea
never any troubles
in her world of bubbles
quite happy fancy and so free

she swims wherever she wishes
with seahorse whale and crayfishes
with sparkling raven hair
that just flows everywhere
chasing the fresh seafood dishes

Mermaids Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier
9/20/2019

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Line Gauthier January 5, 2020 at 10:54 AM Peaceful and lovely imagery, Timothy. This is the part of judging I hate~ good poems inevitably get lost in the shuffle. Timothy Mcguire January 5, 2020 at 4:52 PM There is nothing wrong with your judging. Not every poem is good enough to win.

Elaine Perrin October 23, 2019 at 5:23 AM I really enjoyed this one Timothy :-) x Timothy Mcguire October 23, 2019 at 7:52 PM Thank you Elaine

Lindsay Laurie September 22, 2019 at 6:28 PM Seafood dishes Timothy! Crikey, I think I'm a mermaid - thank you Timothy - Lindsay Timothy Mcguire September 22, 2019 at 9:53 PM Do you have a flipper?

Jan Allison September 22, 2019 at 2:46 PM absolutely charming Timothy I love it:-) hugs Jan xx Timothy Mcguire September 22, 2019 at 4:08 PM Thanks again Jan :)