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World of Bubbles

have you seen the mermaid beauty who swims down in the deep blue sea never any troubles in her world of bubbles quite happy fancy and so free she swims wherever she wishes with seahorse whale and crayfishes with sparkling raven hair that just flows everywhere chasing the fresh seafood dishes Mermaids Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier 9/20/2019

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Date: 1/5/2020 10:54:00 AM
Peaceful and lovely imagery, Timothy. This is the part of judging I hate~ good poems inevitably get lost in the shuffle.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 1/5/2020 4:52:00 PM
There is nothing wrong with your judging. Not every poem is good enough to win.
Date: 10/23/2019 5:23:00 AM
I really enjoyed this one Timothy :-) x
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/23/2019 7:52:00 PM
Thank you Elaine
Date: 9/22/2019 6:28:00 PM
Seafood dishes Timothy! Crikey, I think I'm a mermaid - thank you Timothy - Lindsay
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/22/2019 9:53:00 PM
Do you have a flipper?
Date: 9/22/2019 2:46:00 PM
absolutely charming Timothy I love it:-) hugs Jan xx
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/22/2019 4:08:00 PM
Thanks again Jan :)

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