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World Cup Haiku

White ball in brook floats Green field, sails on wing, fans out Suns victory soars

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Date: 7/14/2014 11:26:00 AM
- Great haiku, Earl !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/14/2014 12:37:00 PM
Good morning Anne Lise, Thank you so much. I think I have about 10 World Cup haiku poems bottled up in me trying to get out. I just rewrote this one this minute to make it more compact and reasonable. I appreciate your commenting. Have a great day. Earl
Date: 7/14/2014 7:25:00 AM
Cool :)
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Date: 7/14/2014 12:44:00 PM
Hi Casarah. Thanks! It is good to hear from you. Though I am happy with this one I rewrote it minutes ago. I'm trying to make it more concise and tight. Take care. Thanks again. Earl