World Cruise

W    with my friends I  ventured on a cruise
o      out with my bags early , fun I didn't want to loose
r      ran to the ship, the trip was to amuse
l       left the shore at  the decided hour
d      deprived  soon was  the fun, as wild storm turned it sour
 c        cutting the waves n storm ,ship went up n down in rage
r        rough weather ,with muddy drafts restricted smooth voyage 
u       useless is the  trip we thought but thanked fate when it  retraced
I        in  cabins we savored  sites which we cannot efface
s       sites we enjoyed, we danced n dined such fun we  can retrace 
e       excitement  governed ,it showed on every face.
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