World

If world is round or squre we have to care It gives us light form the shining sun and twinkle from the twinkling stars. It freshin our body with fresh air and a nice glare It gives us food like no kunning do. World is our mother and we should prove!!!!!

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Beata Agustin

Date: 5/10/2025 5:26:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/6/2013 5:13:00 PM

Enjoying your free verse poem... Livana, Impressive Visionary! Stunning and powerful... Dynamic work! Linda