Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

Work of Angels

WORK OF ANGELS

From dawn to dawn rustling wings merciful song

shredding lemon zest to brighten the sun
stuffing pillow clouds with fanciful cotton
replacing light bulbs in each burned-out star
retouching each haloed cirque of a rainbow
whittling each phase of the wayfaring moon

From dusk to dusk seraphim and cherubim hum along

6/1/2017
7 Line Max contest
1st Place

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Carole Duet June 6, 2017 at 4:46 PM This is so great, Kim, and certainly a deserved win. Kim Rodrigues June 21, 2017 at 5:55 PM Thank you, Carole!

Janis Medders Tobechi June 4, 2017 at 10:59 PM I love the wonderful images you have here. Congratulations on your trophy win. Kim Rodrigues June 4, 2017 at 11:07 PM Thank you, Janis!

Lin Lane June 3, 2017 at 5:58 AM You've created a beautiful flight of fancy, Kim. Congratulations! Kim Rodrigues June 3, 2017 at 7:41 AM Thank you, Lin!

Jan Allison June 3, 2017 at 3:19 AM many congrats on your top spot Kim, such a beautiful poem:-) hugs Jan xx Kim Rodrigues June 3, 2017 at 7:47 AM Thank you, Jan <3

Gregory Richard Barden June 3, 2017 at 3:17 AM Love this, Kim - wonderful imagery, and such a whimsical romp! Congrats on first place! :-) Kim Rodrigues June 3, 2017 at 7:41 AM Thank you, Greg!

Curtis Johnson June 3, 2017 at 1:45 AM Great work Kim. The angels are really busy. I love your imagination. Blessings. Kim Rodrigues June 3, 2017 at 7:47 AM Thank you, Curtis!

Dean Wood June 2, 2017 at 11:45 PM Congratulations Kim on a well deserved win. Enjoyed it. - Dean Kim Rodrigues June 3, 2017 at 7:50 AM Thank you, Dean!

Dale Gregory Cozart June 2, 2017 at 7:57 PM congrats! Kim Rodrigues June 2, 2017 at 7:58 PM Thank you, Dale!

Asad Abdalle June 1, 2017 at 4:49 PM Beautifully done Kim, your poems always amazes me. Kim Rodrigues June 1, 2017 at 6:58 PM Thank you so much, Asad!

Chris Green June 1, 2017 at 11:57 AM This was really nice Kim. It feels angelic. Kim Rodrigues June 1, 2017 at 12:20 PM Thank you, Chris!

Dale Gregory Cozart June 1, 2017 at 11:18 AM this is charming. Kim Rodrigues June 1, 2017 at 11:19 AM Thanks, Dale!