Richard Lamoureux Poet Monorhyme

Work In Progress

It can be tough, following rules
I can try but may lack the tools
Some may think it's a game for fools
It can be tough

I am confused, I think and think
Perhaps easier with a drink
But when I'm sober it may stink
I am confused 

Words like weather, can always change
Some I start with I rearrange
A few make sense others are strange
Words like weather

This is the end of my small write
Out of the dark into the light
It may be wrong it may be right
This is the end

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Debbie Knapp June 26, 2013 at 6:58 PM You are a winner because you try and keep on trying my friend. I do not know the rules nor do I understand them. Richard Lamoureux June 26, 2013 at 8:45 PM Thanks again Debbie, the contests are what I use to sharpen and hone my skills

Richard D Seal June 26, 2013 at 6:09 PM I think you've done very well here Rick. I still don't know one form from another and least you enter the spirit of the soup and try, which is more than I can say for me, though I have to say I miss most coz I'm just slow at writing. I do admire the prolificators. Take care, Richard Richard Lamoureux June 26, 2013 at 8:47 PM What a great word, prolificators. You have boosted my spirits with your kind visit. Take care.

Nette Onclaud June 23, 2013 at 2:11 PM The changing moods of this work gives it much appeal... well done, richard..:) huggs Richard Lamoureux June 23, 2013 at 4:39 PM Thanks Nette, I hope you are outside enjoying a splendid day.