work in progress

like and ancient relic from a distant past
the faded carbon copy of who he never was
a meaningless error in the history of humankind
and yet there is hope of finding out truths
about life suffering miracles and mostly himself
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Buhagiar Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 1:45 AM
Shall we ask Pilate about truth? Bet he didn't know. Great introspection.
Hind Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 9:53 PM
very true :)
Neumann Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 1:03 AM
Thank you for your reply and kid wishes, Kai
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