Probir Gupta Poet Rhyme

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One mountain after another
The green jagged edges
Puffy clouds hither and thither
Cloud around the sedges

Clouds make love with high peaks
Holding our gaze in awe
While the lips the mountain-top seeks
Wind blows and clouds withdraw

Clouds are somewhat promiscuous
Now they love the hill tops
Soon they feel it monotonous
And shift to thick green locks

The hills are lost in lovely thoughts
Rhododendrons are nice
We try to find their lovely plots
Drizzle and congealed ice

Blue thrush sings you whistling
You feel relaxed like sky
You draw fragrance deeply smelling
The musk rose laughs close by

Suddenly lands a roaring sound
Filling the nearby air
Very soon all the silence drowned
River descending there

Amazingly tall waterfall
Thundering and making us small
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16 August, 2016 : For Contest : Wordscapes : Sponsored by John Hamilton

The concluding two lines  in addition to the stipulated 24 could not be avoided

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Demetrios Trifiatis August 17, 2016 at 5:35 AM Nature will be delighted to know a son of hers such a poetry can write! A 7 dear, Probir! Probir Gupta August 17, 2016 at 6:48 AM Nice ... And that too in the usual monoku ... Thank you ...

Daniel Turner August 16, 2016 at 7:24 AM A beauty Probir! When I see the clouds hugging the mountains, it's just so hard to explain how it makes me feel. I think it is one of the most peaceful sights one can see. Really nice poem. I definitely enjoyed this one. Probir Gupta August 16, 2016 at 12:17 PM Thank you ...