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Words Whisperer

You’ve swallowed my misery, 
My old self, just by a smile;
By letting me feel the mountains move, 
You’ve freed me, just by a smile;
My twisted thoughts,
Have been untangled by you, with just a smile;
I offer my body and soul to you, O my words whisperer,
You’ve whispered me a new life, just by a smile;
I offer myself to you O, Jamlaila,
You’ve made me your man, just by a smile.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 12/13/2016 4:58:00 PM
Dear Ernesto, this is a beautiful poem but it does not follow the criteria for ghazal.. PS has good examples
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