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Words Weave

Undeniable this what I feel Unexpectedly caught off guard Once broken now I can heal Just left my heart scarred Time I took perhaps too long Yet felt so good to just breathe How in life could that be wrong Allowing my own words to weave

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John Fleming

Date: 9/15/2019 6:03:00 AM

Nicely rhymed, Poetess...as is usual with your rhyming poetry it skips briskly along. Enjoyed! In affection. :) john

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/15/2019 5:50:00 PM

Thank you so much John!;) all my affection!;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/12/2019 2:27:00 PM

A perfect title for this poem, for the words truly are expertly interwoven. So nice, Brenda. (Soup mail, please). Thanks, Gershon

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/12/2019 2:44:00 PM

You are too kind Gershwin! Thank you!;)

Chris Green

Date: 9/12/2019 11:05:00 AM

Sometimes it is much easier when we write out our feelings and allow our words to heal our hearts. This was gorgeous Brenda.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/12/2019 11:39:00 AM

Thanks Chris! Your too kind!;)

Ann Foster

Date: 9/12/2019 10:54:00 AM

healing and weaving...like a song with words... I enjoyed this write very much. Hugs. Ann

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/12/2019 11:39:00 AM

Thank you Anne I am glad you enjoyed it!;)