Rebecca Pasco Poet I do not know?

Words Unspoken(R.I.P.Big Bro)1986-2009

Listen in the distance i am always near,tell me of a memborie so that i may hear.Because as 
much as you miss me,i miss you even more.As much as you love me,i am better now than 
before.And i am certain if you are patient you will smell me in the breeze,you will sence my 
presents with bowed heads and bent knees.Because it is in the quietest place you will think 
of me and smile to yourself,it is in the depths of your heart the tears will file thereself.Just 
close your eyes with me and picture the most beautiful land,and praise be to God because 
that is where i am.I understand you must cry but don't cry long,and mom i know you don't 
understand now,but i ask you remain strong.No more tears,no more pain,not another heart 
broken,please just love and remember me,for these are my words unspoken.

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William Kershaw June 25, 2009 at 11:24 PM Rebecca, I am so sorry for your loss. You true feeling come thru in your words. Thank You for taking the time to review my stuff. God Bless, Will

Sajdah Al-Riyami June 21, 2009 at 6:20 AM Your language and words are so powerdul=) Sometimes in your poems we can see the pain and sorrow and emotions-->Structure it better(Suggestion)

Jay Loveless June 10, 2009 at 9:20 AM Girl. Your Gonna Make Me Get Down On My Knees And Cry. Bravo Babii. Wow...The Words Your Brother Didnt Get To Say? (R.I.P) Your Writing Is Beautiful. Peace. Boo P.S. Remember Those Words For Yourself Too.

Gareth Stockwood June 4, 2009 at 11:06 PM brilliant so emotional, but strong i loved it, congrats on this exceptional write, and keep fighting.

L'Nass Shango June 4, 2009 at 10:00 PM We praise your words but love you ... without you we have no words or cheer, so keep on fighting the battle as we pray ... we believe the end is not in our wisdom but the love of him who made us .... the dawn will break ... clear as the lessons of your word. Bravo.