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Sotto Poet's The Unseen Contest...22 Sept 26

Words Unsaid

< em>Light evanesced upon his leaving 
with the final choke of dusk-- 
the fragrance of orchids wisping softly 
and I shiver...vapid, empty
 clouds swallowing the kiln of lamppost-

and into the restless clang 
from winds booming,
the dirge  of hummingbirds stutters
 which makes noises louder
 than my groans-- the ceiling of sky 
breaking like splinters of glass- 
and among  incandescent stars,

our distant,  intermittent rendezvous 
withers as my peppered tears grate 
the bitter tincture of night's burial
from all his trespasses,
 a body language
coiled in stale cocoon...his words
barbed as jailed verses ...

 unuttered ,unsaid.
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Godwin Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 6:23 PM
Wonderful writing, Nette, great imagery w/o losing meaning. Beautifully done, wrapped and wearing a poetically emotive bow. CayCay
Lawless Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 6:33 AM
"words, barbed as jailed verses..." now there's a poetic line that paints a thousand pictures...Nicely done Nette
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