- Words of Love In the Sky -

When I am away from you
                 We share the same sky
                 I am writing in the sky
                 "I miss you"

 
                 When I am away from you
                 We share the same moon
                 I write on the moon
                 "I'm thinking of you"


                 When I am away from you
                 We share all the stars
                 I write between the stars
                 "I love you"




     Sky
     Some believe there are different levels of heaven
     Heaven must be shared with, mercy, compassion and love

     Moon
     In the old days, some thought that one could get "lunatic" by looking at the moon
     The Moon is our nearest neighbor in space .... provides a romantic light

     Stars
     Stars have fascinated people for thousands of years
     Flashing pin heads on a beautiful night sky.








18.11.2013
A-L  Andresen :)
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Das Avatar
January 5, 2014 at 9:41 AM
This is very touching :)
Jordan Avatar
January 13, 2014 at 4:36 PM
Words of love in the sky, well written. I'm a fan!
Andresen Avatar
January 5, 2014 at 9:48 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Susmita - always pleased to receive feedback on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Dome Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 12:11 PM
Awe, someone is very lucky. I love your romantic works, got my heat all a flutter. Well done. Pete.
Andresen Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 12:13 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Peter - always pleased to receive feedback on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Arno Avatar
December 20, 2013 at 5:58 PM
Love this! Love flows abundantly in this wonderful piece
Andresen Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 7:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Jon - always pleased to receive feedback on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Melugin Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 6:13 PM
Anne-lise Words of Love....your words.....your heart......your brilliance....have become.......My fav.....congratulations Miss Norway!!!! chuck
Andresen Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 6:50 PM
- A small and simple poetry - tell it like it is :)) - thanks for the nice visit Chuck. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Eseke Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 6:53 AM
WOOOOOW ..YOU SO GOOD,GO EAT SOME FOOD...just joking ...your poems are exceptional.excellent
Andresen Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 6:56 AM
- A small and simple poetry - tell it like it is :)) - thanks for the nice visit Austin. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Kearley Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 12:44 AM
Your so sweet! Such a loving poem. :o) xoxo
Andresen Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 3:53 AM
- A small and simple poetry - tell it like it is :)) - thanks for the nice visit Dan. - oxox // f.e.f. Anne-Lise :)
Hamilton Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 5:51 PM
Anne Lise this is fantastic what a tremendous poem I love it Shadow x smile hug
Andresen Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 5:53 PM
- Thank you my faithful reader Shadow, always enjoyable to see you on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Thompson Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 4:18 PM
Very lovely sentiment beautifully done. I enjoyed reading it today. ...Foxie Thanks for your welcome to PS.
Andresen Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 4:19 PM
- A small and simple poetry - tell it like it is :)) - thanks for the nice visit Mary. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 2:49 PM
beautiful write Anne....
Andresen Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 2:53 PM
- Thank you my faithful reader Joseph, always enjoyable to see you on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Undertaker Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 10:06 AM
Anne Lisa, this an exceptionally great way to write love poems. truly Anne Lisa a poets' hand in action.Excellent and really great! What a marvelous poem! (: ) New Santa.
Andresen Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 12:22 PM
- A small and simple poetry - tell it like it is :)) - thanks for the nice visit Santa. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Vaso Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 9:58 PM
Beautiful filled with love, inspiration and wisdom!
Andresen Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 2:54 AM
- A small and simple poetry - tell it like it is :)) - thanks for the nice visit Arthur. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Harrell Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 7:50 AM
I love it so much, Anne-Lise! It makes one seem so close to another no matter the distance. Yes, I will write it in the sky :). Enjoyed!
Andresen Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 7:55 AM
- Thank you my faithful reader Toquyen, always enjoyable to see you on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Gleason Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 7:16 PM
What a wonderful piece which leaves me pondering how often i take time to enjoy the night sky. Any poem that leaves the reader wanting more is truly a success! -Mazz
Andresen Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 3:42 AM
A small and simple poetry - tell it like it is :)) - thanks for the nice visit Maz. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Anish Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 3:09 PM
Sounds like nice skywriting to me! Tender, romantic work here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Andresen Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 3:14 PM
- Thank you my faithful reader Matthew, always enjoyable to see you on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Virden Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 10:34 AM
Love the simple poem and how you showed the depths of romance at the end. A beautiful piece my friend.
Andresen Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 10:36 AM
- A small and simple poetry - tell it like it is :)) - thanks for the nice visit Sarai. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 9:58 AM
i feel the love, anne... time to celebrate this moment so divine, always... :) sweet huggs
Andresen Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 10:35 AM
Thank you my faithful reader Nette, always enjoyable to see you on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Matose Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 7:31 AM
THANKS ANNE, FOR SHARING. THIS IMAGINERY POEM IS MARVELLOUS. FRIEND, JM
Andresen Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 10:34 AM
Thank you my faithful reader Joseph, always enjoyable to see you on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Dunn Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 7:41 PM
My lady of emotion and expression your words are like a fine delicate woven shaw and makes you feel warm and cozy to place on when you are cold and alone you warm the heart and soul with your words of eliquce. cheri
Andresen Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 3:22 AM
- A small and simple poetry - tell it like it is :)) - thanks for the nice visit Cherl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Delaney Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 4:19 PM
Such romance....glad to read this today. SuZ
Andresen Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 3:21 AM
- A small and simple poetry - tell it like it is :)) - thanks for the nice visit SuZ. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 2:23 PM
sweet and very beautifully penned piece
Andresen Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 2:24 PM
- Thank you my faithful reader Liam, always enjoyable to see you on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Peterson Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 1:35 PM
This is lovely Lise, and I experienced a kind of reverie reading it. Totally unexpected but welcome.
Andresen Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 1:50 PM
- A small and simple poetry - tell it like it is :)) - thanks for the nice visit Mark. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Tacito Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 11:22 AM
Fantastic! I'm all smiles! =D
Andresen Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 11:24 AM
- A small and simple poetry - tell it like it is :)) - thanks for the nice visit Drake. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 10:20 AM
this is beautiful Anne-Lise...when i look at the sky it inspires me, often in the tones of love....lovely poem you have penned :) hugs
Andresen Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 10:27 AM
- Thank you my faithful reader Sandra, always enjoyable to see you on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 9:44 AM
Passionate lines..Enjoyed reading them today..I went out early this morn to see if I could see the moon and what stage it was in it is either full, nearly full or going down can't tell because I haven't been looking at it every night..If I do strange things I might be lunar struck..Ha!!! ..Sara
Andresen Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 10:27 AM
- Thank you my faithful reader Sara, always enjoyable to see you on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Jackson Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 9:21 AM
Hi Anne Lise, a lovely romantic poem.Perfect. Very best wishes Linda x
Andresen Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 10:26 AM
- A small and simple poetry - tell it like it is :)) - thanks for the nice visit Linda. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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