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Words I'Ve Fed

Have I made a difference? Have I swayed a mind? Have I showed desire? In truth have I been kind? When life goes on without me Will my name still be said? Or will I just die unnoticed With meaningful words I've fed?

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Joshua Brown

Date: 10/23/2019 4:05:00 AM

I really like this poem. A question I have asked myself many times. Good job!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/23/2019 8:23:00 AM

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment! Glad to know I'm not the only one who thinks this!;)

John Fleming

Date: 10/21/2019 2:43:00 PM

Poetic words are the truest expression of pure thought: immutable and ageless like the great void. Lots of warmth and much affection this cold night, Brenda. :) john

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/21/2019 5:08:00 PM

Ahh John thank you so very much! I'm glad you liked this one!;)

Chris Green

Date: 10/21/2019 1:40:00 PM

Your words in a way are sad but they are words that I truly can relate to. Believe me Brenda, you will be remembered for all of the good thing you have done in your life.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/21/2019 2:24:00 PM

Thanks so much chris!;)

John Hamilton

Date: 10/20/2019 2:20:00 PM

Great write Brenda, you will definitely be remembered!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/20/2019 3:15:00 PM

Thank you John that is so kind of you to say!;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/20/2019 11:43:00 AM

Your words will live on, no doubt, my poetic friend... Of course, we also live on in the memories (and through the deeds and charitable giving) of our loved ones...Here's to life in the here and now too, as well as Eternal Life. :-) gw

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/20/2019 1:29:00 PM

Gershon you truly are too sweet! Thank you my friend! I really appreciate your stopping by!;)

Ts Poetry

Date: 10/20/2019 9:55:00 AM

You definitely have made a difference in this world...look at your children and friends

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/20/2019 1:28:00 PM

Thanks TS I'm glad to know I made some kinda difference! That's what friends are for!;)

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/20/2019 5:52:00 AM

death always touches the ones who are in our circle...i am sure your name would be said and you would be remembered...poignant but good write! :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/20/2019 1:27:00 PM

Thank you so much Sandy!;)