Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Words I'Ve Fed

Have I made a difference?
Have I swayed a mind?
Have I showed desire?
In truth have I been kind?

When life goes on without me
Will my name still be said?
Or will I just die unnoticed 
With meaningful words I've fed?

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Joshua Brown October 23, 2019 at 4:05 AM I really like this poem. A question I have asked myself many times. Good job! Brenda Chiri October 23, 2019 at 8:23 AM Thank you for taking the time to read and comment! Glad to know I'm not the only one who thinks this!;)

John Fleming October 21, 2019 at 2:43 PM Poetic words are the truest expression of pure thought: immutable and ageless like the great void. Lots of warmth and much affection this cold night, Brenda. :) john Brenda Chiri October 21, 2019 at 5:08 PM Ahh John thank you so very much! I'm glad you liked this one!;)

Chris Green October 21, 2019 at 1:40 PM Your words in a way are sad but they are words that I truly can relate to. Believe me Brenda, you will be remembered for all of the good thing you have done in your life. Brenda Chiri October 21, 2019 at 2:24 PM Thanks so much chris!;)

John Hamilton October 20, 2019 at 2:20 PM Great write Brenda, you will definitely be remembered! Brenda Chiri October 20, 2019 at 3:15 PM Thank you John that is so kind of you to say!;)

Gershon Wolf October 20, 2019 at 11:43 AM Your words will live on, no doubt, my poetic friend... Of course, we also live on in the memories (and through the deeds and charitable giving) of our loved ones...Here's to life in the here and now too, as well as Eternal Life. :-) gw Brenda Chiri October 20, 2019 at 1:29 PM Gershon you truly are too sweet! Thank you my friend! I really appreciate your stopping by!;)

Ts Poetry October 20, 2019 at 9:55 AM You definitely have made a difference in this world...look at your children and friends Brenda Chiri October 20, 2019 at 1:28 PM Thanks TS I'm glad to know I made some kinda difference! That's what friends are for!;)

Sandra Adams October 20, 2019 at 5:52 AM death always touches the ones who are in our circle...i am sure your name would be said and you would be remembered...poignant but good write! :) Brenda Chiri October 20, 2019 at 1:27 PM Thank you so much Sandy!;)