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Words In Motion

Poets brood on words
Endeavour to dare new pen
Plough on for their aim.
Tune your ink into a song
Sung, to you no more belong.


May 16th, 2018

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/30/2018 5:40:00 PM

Sending your children out into the world can be daunting. Fortunately you have no ugly children.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/30/2018 6:02:00 PM

I'm grateful to you for sharing the passion of appreciating the world of words.. Your vidit and praise are highly valued. Stay safe.

Silent One

Date: 5/30/2018 6:48:00 AM

You are right and words are what makes us poets, some have great talent, some just words.. you have great talent.. Excellent tanka..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/30/2018 8:02:00 AM

A praise coming from you I highly appreciate and value.. Deeply humbled by your generous feedback Silent One. Thank you so much. My pleasure and honour. Stay tuned and blessed.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/24/2018 3:19:00 PM

Indeed, Besma, after the creation of a poem there often comes the urge to share it with others. Even the Creator felt the need to share His creativity with mankind! Regards // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/24/2018 5:31:00 PM

An ardent deep reader validates and adds value to the piece of work.. Thank you Paul for your visit and insightful feedback. My honour and pleasure. Stay blessed.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/17/2018 5:40:00 AM

Your "Words in Motion" produce poetic melody dearest, Bresma!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/17/2018 3:30:00 PM

I'm very glad that you enjoy my write dear Demetrios. That's the essence of sharing the passion of creative writing.. Enjoying the read, adding beauty and value to the write and at the same time enfolding new perspectives and acquiring knowledge.. It is an honour for me to have you as a profound, enlightened and enlightening reader of a great talent. Stay bright and blessed.