Get Your Premium Membership

Words Dive Bomb Me

Words dive bombed my hands and my feet Pelting me like missiles. Needles going into my pores. I screamed. I could not fend them off. It felt like acupuncture on speed. The words were scary and mean Decidedly determined to hurt, horrify and humiliate me I was putty in their perfect, putrid, pelts. I begged for mercy. They made me pick up a pen. They forced me to write. Ouch! One just zinged my ear. Apparently I have not satisfied them yet….

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/20/2020 6:35:00 PM
May I suggest 'acupuncture on needles?' ~ Dr. Fur N. Pelts
Login to Reply
Krutsinger Avatar
Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/21/2020 4:54:00 PM
Yes you may suggest anything you want; but you know I do not take suggestions easily. Snicker. Snicker

Book: Shattered Sighs