Words Cannot Compete With Health

Words whispered into bullet holes in motel walls
how reliable are they?
They mean less than they did once upon a mattress
or underneath it perhaps.

Words bullying and strutting
Make no difference 
when a mean one comes for you.

Words cannot compete with health.
I used to think otherwise but there are
so many interactive systems it is impossible
to cut out pieces or make sense of mere words

due to the fierceness of the illness presentation
which has no names but a variety of horrible
symptoms that keep me from finding me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Theraven Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 9:50 AM
Caren, I will wait for more words and read one's missed. Give Trixie a hug. -Richard
Krutsinger Avatar
October 29, 2019 at 11:53 AM
I am coaxing Trixie back out one inch at a time.
Mcferran Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 8:28 PM
It is amazing how much you appreciate health when you don't have it! I nearly died several years ago, and it made me realize just how fragile and precious health really is. Hope you get fully recovered soon!
Krutsinger Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 5:27 AM
I am pondering not feeling well. There is pain in not having health.
Bangalee Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 3:56 AM
oh the age and the health now reside in a body as the democratic and conservative party.....!!
Krutsinger Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 8:43 AM
It is amazing what health or lack of health can do.
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