Words arose

From the one that the words arose Comes a face that strikes a pose Sadness in those eyes Behind the glasses it tries to hide But I know better For sadness I do weather But now as two becomes one We will not be so blue under the sun For of this I might ask Which might be quite a task Is a smile On that cute profile

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stan bridge

Date: 1/26/2011 5:29:00 AM

like the innocence of this my style is rhyme and you do it well here its only 12 lines long but it works the grammers good it flows well yes my friend less is definatly more here well done good write

Linda-Marie SweetHeart

Date: 1/26/2011 4:56:00 AM

Lovely lines Robert .. in your Rhyming Couplet to express a special feeling for a special luv.. enjoyed this early morning with luv..