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Words a Mystic Rose Split-Haiku

Words bewail actions
     Non-interventional distractions

          Losing

     Love in translations

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Rizwana Bhurani

April 2, 2016 at 11:42 AM

Ya true....clever write.....enjoyed.....best wishes

Charlie Smith

April 2, 2016 at 12:10 PM

Thank you Rizwana...Charlie

Richard Lamoureux

March 14, 2016 at 8:48 AM

I enjoyed your split ku! I'm starting to see a lot of these.

Charlie Smith

March 14, 2016 at 10:47 AM

A new twist on an old form. Thanks stopping by...

Andrea Dietrich

March 13, 2016 at 8:05 PM

oh I see , it's a FORM of Mystic's. (just reading what you had replied to Broken Wings)

Charlie Smith

March 13, 2016 at 8:08 PM

Yes, just thought I would give it a whirl.

Andrea Dietrich

March 13, 2016 at 8:04 PM

Was this written for Mystic or with her? An interesting ku!

Constance La France

March 13, 2016 at 4:52 PM

Charlie, very interesting and am loving this 7 ~

Charlie Smith

March 13, 2016 at 4:58 PM

It's an interesting new form from Mystic Rose. Thanks for post, you're very kind Broken Wings

Words a Mystic Rose Split-Haiku

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