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words i use, i carefully choose. To convey i hope and pray, meaning that they true display. Dispel the might's the wrongs, words i use are true and strong, of golden strength so solid be, they are by far and must stand free, so no confusion blinds my sight, my words purpose describes the right. The meaning of the things i say cannot be pulled apart i pray, that once spoken they will show, exactly what i say to you.

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Date: 5/9/2013 8:59:00 PM
Kevin, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"
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Date: 4/28/2013 6:52:00 PM
one more thing Kevin, :-) Welcome to the poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Thanks for your time~ Always*LINDA
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Date: 4/28/2013 6:50:00 PM
Hello Kevin, wow,, you are a new poet and I have not welcomed you to poetry soup. I'm reading the comment you left on the bottom. I've been writing since the age of 12 too. about your poem: wow...that is 2 things we have in common this far. The first poem I posted on the soup is called words. You will find it on page 6 on my poem page. I hope you stop by and read my poem. I think I am liking you as a poet here already. I had fun reading and commenting all the poems you have posted here so far. Kevin, I hope my comment does not freak you out when I tell you, that you have made a believer out of me. wow.~~ You are my newest favorite poet. Hope you keep me posted every time you post a poem. I don't want to miss one... always~ Goodnight~ LINDA
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Kevin callaghan
Date: 4/30/2013 1:14:00 PM
hello Linda i feel maybe we have 3 things in common so far, the 3rd being that we both know something of gaia,s magic although magic being the wrong word electricity is the key
Date: 4/28/2013 12:25:00 PM
Spoken in the true spirit of a poet. Well written and welcome to P/Soup x
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Kevin callaghan
Date: 4/28/2013 12:36:00 PM
Thank you for your comments i.ve been writing since the age of 12 and this is the first poem i.ve ever displayed so thank you again.