Words

Words
        Repetition
Heart Breaking
                     Promises 
Broken!

losshaiku

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James Fraser

October 28, 2009 at 2:44 PM

Short, but to the point Amber >> James

Prince Freakasso

October 23, 2009 at 1:06 PM

Short but not sweet,making a good heart miss many a beat;promises lying broken by one who's a cheat.Nice one Amber,with lot's of meaning.God Bless,PRINCE

Brian Strand

October 18, 2009 at 1:29 AM

Amber thanks for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian

Sara Kendrick

October 17, 2009 at 2:06 PM

Sad to be disappointed in another person. Keep writing. Sara

October 15, 2009 at 4:49 PM

The emotion comes through your words. I think most will relate to times when promises are broken. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you are enjoying your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen