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Words Repetition Heart Breaking Promises Broken!

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James Fraser

Date: 10/28/2009 2:44:00 PM

Short, but to the point Amber >> James

Prince Freakasso

Date: 10/23/2009 1:06:00 PM

Short but not sweet,making a good heart miss many a beat;promises lying broken by one who's a cheat.Nice one Amber,with lot's of meaning.God Bless,PRINCE

Brian Strand

Date: 10/18/2009 1:29:00 AM

Amber thanks for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/17/2009 2:06:00 PM

Sad to be disappointed in another person. Keep writing. Sara

Date: 10/15/2009 4:49:00 PM

The emotion comes through your words. I think most will relate to times when promises are broken. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you are enjoying your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

John Freeman

Date: 10/12/2009 9:43:00 AM

The message is clear Amber. Great Haiku, Sincerely, Love, Moses