Words

Four words
    were they really so 
                         HARD?
 who would have thought

 THOSE FOUR little
   
    could have
  (COULD HAVE)

changed our lives

THOSE FOUR words

                they could have
       (THEY COULD HAVE)

saved me
 
from the fates of loneliness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Megens Avatar
May 23, 2009 at 10:42 AM
I WONDER WHAT THOSE FOUR WORDS ARE?YOU LEAVE ME CURIOUS.WELL I LIKE IT BECAUSE IT LEAVES ONE TO THE IMAGINATION LOOK FORWARD TO ANOTHER
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