Pipping Stars Poet Ode

Word Thirst Slurped

word thirst slurped
sippy cup tipd
letters dripd
love left
leave
me
alone
good enough
i
am
stone
reflections
guidance
of
true
affection
penetrating
often neglections
write me in rings
teach'ering sing
song to death
smoke ing
breath
whatt
electricity
birds hurt chirps
words thirst slurped
?

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Andrea Dietrich August 16, 2017 at 3:37 PM Your title for this poem is really awesome with its rhyme and the effect it has for interpretation. a little e e cummings with your spelling at the top. You could also write phonetically: Tipt!! Pipping Stars August 17, 2017 at 6:14 AM how intriguing. ..... how intellectually stimulating could one be ... hmm ... hey ... wait a minute ... huh ... tipt are the scales in your favor ... uhm ... come here ... let us become cohesively cunning. ... cummins truck engine ... or ... come here ? ... hey ... thanks again you ...