Word Salad

A poetic dish,
Whole...sliced...chopped to the parchment: 
Mixture of raw words.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bien Avatar
October 4, 2009 at 2:38 PM
good job my friend :) JB
Ahmad Avatar
October 2, 2009 at 1:12 PM
yummy....it's funny... I have never read anything like this. This is just awesome! I really enjoyed this SALAD.... you are a good cook...err...poet hahaha...
Bloomsfield Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 10:16 AM
original style-good job
Canady Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 6:43 PM
Hmmmm Salad... Good for You (Smile) kinda, like that onion I wanted ... Good Write MoonBee
Knop Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 2:00 PM
Raw words are very expressive, Raul! And congratulation! Keep on writing...Gert
Austin Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 1:16 PM
Yes. I like raw words, but poetry soup frowns. Congrats on your selection in the weekly. Love, daver
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September 29, 2009 at 12:52 PM
Wonderful and interesting message captured in just three lines. Your creativity shines in this poem. Karen
Fraser Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 12:51 PM
Raul, this Senyru sure ain't green it's clever, kool write >> James
Kendrick Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 12:51 PM
Different approach here. Keep writing. Sara
Devonshire Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 12:14 PM
Indeed, words are "raw" until they flow with the perfect seasoning from your talented hand. Lovely senryu, Raul, and a subject to which all poets can relate. Love, Carolyn (And thanks again for the email!!)
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