Word Salad

A poetic dish, Whole...sliced...chopped to the parchment: Mixture of raw words.

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Jo Bien

Date: 10/4/2009 2:38:00 PM

good job my friend :) JB

Syed Amaan Ahmad

Date: 10/2/2009 1:12:00 PM

yummy....it's funny... I have never read anything like this. This is just awesome! I really enjoyed this SALAD.... you are a good cook...err...poet hahaha...

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 9/30/2009 10:16:00 AM

original style-good job

Moonbee Canady

Date: 9/29/2009 6:43:00 PM

Hmmmm Salad... Good for You (Smile) kinda, like that onion I wanted ... Good Write MoonBee

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/29/2009 2:00:00 PM

Raw words are very expressive, Raul! And congratulation! Keep on writing...Gert

Daver Austin

Date: 9/29/2009 1:16:00 PM

Yes. I like raw words, but poetry soup frowns. Congrats on your selection in the weekly. Love, daver

Date: 9/29/2009 12:52:00 PM

Wonderful and interesting message captured in just three lines. Your creativity shines in this poem. Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/29/2009 12:51:00 PM

Different approach here. Keep writing. Sara

James Fraser

Date: 9/29/2009 12:51:00 PM

Raul, this Senyru sure ain't green it's clever, kool write >> James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/29/2009 12:14:00 PM

Indeed, words are "raw" until they flow with the perfect seasoning from your talented hand. Lovely senryu, Raul, and a subject to which all poets can relate. Love, Carolyn (And thanks again for the email!!)