Maryam Jameela Haniff Poet I do not know?

Word Morph -- Tide To Wave

TIDE to WAVE


The coming dawn brings the TIDE
Across the shore, it spread so WIDE
Inward slowly, I start to WADE
It carries me in, with its WAVE


Author's note: This is just a try don't know if it's done right..lol....Maryam

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Debbie Guzzi January 14, 2009 at 1:48 PM Wow you did this so nice and easy Maryam! I can't seem to get a handle on one. grumble Light & Love Debbie

Robin L. Gass January 14, 2009 at 1:16 PM Awesome!!!! You did an excellent job, Maryam. I hope you enter. A contender for sure! I love the content as well as the form. Love, Robin

Chitra Lakhera January 14, 2009 at 2:46 AM Seems like perfect to me. Nicely said. Love, Chitra

Mohamed Shokry January 13, 2009 at 5:50 PM Great word morph , i didn't know about it till now.

Sharon Winter January 13, 2009 at 4:48 PM Looks like you did it fine! It is not easy, that's for sure! Good job! Love, Shar

John Loving Iii January 13, 2009 at 2:32 PM yes you did it right! give that lady a prize. JHL

Jen H. January 13, 2009 at 2:28 PM I like it Maryam, I think it's really well done, but then again I never have been very god at word morphs. haha Lots of love ~Jen~

Carrie Richards January 13, 2009 at 2:12 PM Looks perfect to me!! Good job! ~ Carrie