Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

Word Challenge

Their lives were filled with meanness and insanity.
These people lived with no regard for humanity.
They acted with partners of crime, responsible for a fatality.
To keep their secrets they threatened with brutality.
There was not an ounce of empathy in their mentality.
Yet they could hide behind daily acts of mundanity.
They could change on a whim with urbanity.
They could look prestigious with their money and formality.
Still these people bonded together without any morality.
They relied on threats to keep others silent with profanity.
Until one day someone was brave enough to face reality,
Of what was lost as it all returned with righteous volcanity. 
Surging forward, confronted the evil with vitality.
Only to be faced with their desperate denial and inanity.
Evil doers laughed with no remorse, vowing lies for eternity.

Heidi Sands

1/21/17

Placed 8th in Contest:  Word Challenge

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Pandita Sietesantos February 8, 2017 at 8:55 AM Very cleverly crafted with depth and a strong message! Love how you incorporated the words. That was not easy to do! Congratulations and a 7 for a wonderful win! Best regards. Pandita Heidi Sands February 8, 2017 at 8:57 AM Thank you so much Pandita ! :)

Probir Gupta February 2, 2017 at 9:33 AM Congratulations on your very deserving win, Heidi ... Heidi Sands February 2, 2017 at 10:40 AM Thank you Probir. :)

Freddie Robinson Jr. January 24, 2017 at 4:36 PM This poem is so cool, Heidi. It really flows, message wise and on the poetic side. Reads like a winner to me. An excellent monorhyme poem. Love and joy to you. Heidi Sands January 24, 2017 at 5:25 PM Thank you so much Freddie :)

Joanna Daniel January 23, 2017 at 4:01 AM This one is surely a winner, Heidi:) a 7 for its beauty:) Heidi Sands January 23, 2017 at 6:43 AM Thanks so much Jo Daniel :)

Meenakshi Raina January 23, 2017 at 1:03 AM Very well written....good luck in the contest... Heidi Sands January 23, 2017 at 6:42 AM Thank you very much :)

Edward Mccall January 21, 2017 at 6:56 PM That is amazing Heidi absolutely amazing. Heidi Sands January 22, 2017 at 6:58 AM Thank you Edward :)

Gary Smith January 21, 2017 at 3:39 PM That's going to take some beating Heidi, Excellent poem. :) Heidi Sands January 21, 2017 at 3:40 PM Thank you so much Gary :)

Wendy Rycroft January 21, 2017 at 2:20 PM Wow you did really great well done I think you got a winner there girl x Heidi Sands January 21, 2017 at 2:22 PM Thanks Wendy :)