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Wool

Wool Cozy and soft as interwoven strands of wool, Yet sending quivers, passion storms coerce within, Heart lends its warmth to the soul. Tanka- 5/7/5/7/7 Written Jan 18th, 2016 For contest- Wool (five lines) Sponsor- C.T. Awarded 7th place win

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/29/2016 8:20:00 PM

Dr Upma, congrats on your WOOLISH win. XOX -LINDA-

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2016 3:29:00 PM

I love the connection you made to warmth of love with the image of the wool. Congrats for your win.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/24/2016 1:40:00 PM

Lovely and romantically motivated, Upma. #7 Congratulations! // paul

Joseph May

Date: 1/21/2016 3:16:00 PM

Congrats on your win Dr Upma

Skat A

Date: 1/21/2016 12:16:00 PM

Dr Upma, Congrats on your Wooly wool win. Love **SKAT **

James Inman

Date: 1/21/2016 10:30:00 AM

This is lovely Dr Upma.

Dan Cwiak

Date: 1/21/2016 12:12:00 AM

Very nice, Upma. Should have placed higher, in my humble opinion. Congrats.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 1/21/2016 12:43:00 AM

Thank you Dan.

C T

Date: 1/20/2016 11:21:00 PM

thank you

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 1/21/2016 12:43:00 AM

Thanks to you Chase.. so glad u liked this one..

Daniel Turner

Date: 1/18/2016 7:12:00 AM

I like it. Good luck!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 1/21/2016 12:44:00 AM

Thank you Daniel//