Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Tanka

Wool

Wool 





Cozy and soft as
interwoven strands of wool,
Yet sending quivers,
passion storms coerce within,
Heart lends its warmth to the soul.




Tanka- 5/7/5/7/7
Written Jan 18th, 2016
For contest- Wool (five lines)
Sponsor- C.T.

Awarded 7th place win

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Poet Destroyer A January 29, 2016 at 8:20 PM Dr Upma, congrats on your WOOLISH win. XOX -LINDA-

Andrea Dietrich January 24, 2016 at 3:29 PM I love the connection you made to warmth of love with the image of the wool. Congrats for your win.

Paul Callus January 24, 2016 at 1:40 PM Lovely and romantically motivated, Upma. #7 Congratulations! // paul

Joseph May January 21, 2016 at 3:16 PM Congrats on your win Dr Upma

Skat A January 21, 2016 at 12:16 PM Dr Upma, Congrats on your Wooly wool win. Love **SKAT **

James Inman January 21, 2016 at 10:30 AM This is lovely Dr Upma.

Dan Cwiak January 21, 2016 at 12:12 AM Very nice, Upma. Should have placed higher, in my humble opinion. Congrats. Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 21, 2016 at 12:43 AM Thank you Dan.

C T January 20, 2016 at 11:21 PM thank you Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 21, 2016 at 12:43 AM Thanks to you Chase.. so glad u liked this one..

Daniel Turner January 18, 2016 at 7:12 AM I like it. Good luck! Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 21, 2016 at 12:44 AM Thank you Daniel//