Wool

Get me some wool!
I will make a cloud which will actually fly
To take me to paradise
Where dads never die
And moms can hug their stillborn child

Dec 30, 2015
Written for the "Wool 5 liner contest"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Inman Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 9:57 AM
Lovely, touching write, Rahy.
Hy Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 11:50 AM
Thank you James! Hugs, Rahy
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December 30, 2015 at 10:21 PM
Very good, Rahy! Good luck in the contest. Have a great New Year's Day
Hy Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 7:03 AM
Thank you Eve, Wishing you and your loved ones a year filled with peace and prosperity. Hugs, Rahy
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