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Wool

Get me some wool! I will make a cloud which will actually fly To take me to paradise Where dads never die And moms can hug their stillborn child Dec 30, 2015 Written for the "Wool 5 liner contest"

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Date: 1/8/2016 9:57:00 AM
Lovely, touching write, Rahy.
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Date: 2/3/2016 11:50:00 AM
Thank you James! Hugs, Rahy
Date: 12/30/2015 10:21:00 PM
Very good, Rahy! Good luck in the contest. Have a great New Year's Day
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Date: 1/8/2016 7:03:00 AM
Thank you Eve, Wishing you and your loved ones a year filled with peace and prosperity. Hugs, Rahy