Woodsy Palindrome Paradise

There was not a  "peep" among the trees in this autumn woodsy paradise.
The leaves were much "redder" than remembered in days long past.
An unfamiliar "pop" sound led my eyes downward, where I saw gray squirrel,
With his little brown "eye" focused on a walnut that had rolled from her tree.
A "hadedah" flew past, a rare bird for this magical place, a mysterious visitor,
Grass "dewed" to perfection, there was a crunch as we wandered further into the forest.
The "marram" grasses which bordered this paradise, were virginally left alone, unscathed
As the sun approached 'noon' we heard a renegade "peep", whose source is yet to be found.
The deepest part of the forest was a "wow" for me, I had never seen such beautiful vegetation.
My friend discovered a left behind "alula", probably from a blue jay judging from its markings.
I suggested we leave it here, "deified" in reverence by the charming protection of the forest.
We gave a sad "pip-pip" to the day’s end, as twilight overtook the forest, and we re-entered reality.



Written 10-3-2018                          Contest:  Palidromes Ii
                                                    Sponsor:  Joseph May
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dutta Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 8:00 AM
CONGRATS Caren to win top on your great poem.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 4:51 PM
Thank you Anisha. It was an unexpected honor and surprise.
Roper Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 7:47 PM
Caren, congratulations on your great win in this palindromes contest.. great imagery
Krutsinger Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 10:17 PM
Thank you Eve. I appreciate it.
May Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 2:33 PM
Nicely depicted story of a trip to the forest ..Very nicely written Caren...Congrats on your win..
Krutsinger Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 4:06 PM
Thank you Joseph. I appreciate it.
Gauthier Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 2:32 PM
Delightful. Congrats on your top win, Caren. Well done!
Krutsinger Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 4:06 PM
Thank you Line. It was fun to do.
Kiser Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 8:09 AM
What fun; so soothing and wonderfully magical. Well done.
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October 4, 2018 at 8:43 AM
Thank you. This was one of my few thinking poems, as it is had palidomes in it and I did not know what they were.
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