Woodpecker

a sycamore tree its branches raised to heaven a woodpecker pounds 8/20/19

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/30/2021 3:33:00 AM

"branches raised to heaven" - what a terrific line!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/31/2019 12:08:00 PM

Amazing tree and amazing bird. It seems impossible for a bird to make that much noise and also be able to drill holes in a tree. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/30/2019 4:32:00 PM

Better the tree then my house!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/26/2019 12:04:00 PM

Nice haiku Kim. Can see the guy pecking away at that tree. love phyl

Kim Merryman
Date: 8/29/2019 2:13:00 PM

Thank you, Phyllis!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/21/2019 11:18:00 AM

I love the contrast in this one. Ah, that woodpecker, oblivious to the higher, finer things in life, just pounding away. Nicely done, Kim. :) gw

Kim Merryman
Date: 8/29/2019 2:13:00 PM

We have one in our giant sycamore tree and he can get quite loud. Thank you for your comment, Gerson!