Woodlands

Haiku competition for Raul Moreno  (as per his photograph submitted)





Brambles cloaked with green
Spring sunlight gleams through the trees
Wood thrush in full song.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/9/2011 7:51:00 AM
Beautiful haiku Deirdre:))
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Date: 12/23/2009 3:36:00 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor Deirdre and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 4:51:00 PM
simply charming..congrad's on your win! Light 7 Love
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:38:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 2:00:00 PM
Excellent haiku! Congratulations on moving to the next round, Deirdre! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2009 11:38:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 11/8/2009 11:59:00 AM
A vivid Haiku Deirdre, Congratulations on it being featured, Sincerely, Love Moses
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Date: 11/6/2009 4:18:00 PM
Congrats on your feature write this week! Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/2/2009 12:58:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James
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Date: 11/2/2009 11:32:00 AM
Good use of imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 11/2/2009 7:43:00 AM
This makes me want to be there! Congratulations on this one being featured this week, Deirdre! ~ Carrie
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Date: 11/2/2009 3:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Deirdre. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/2/2009 12:31:00 AM
Congrats on your featured poem this week Deirdre Rgds Brian
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Date: 10/3/2009 12:12:00 AM
Nice one Deirdre.thanks for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/16/2009 7:45:00 PM
very romantic take! i like it lots! Light & Love
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Date: 9/8/2009 7:49:00 AM
Hi Deirdre I can hear the song and it's so beautiful! Love your beautifully written Haiku! Good luck in contest, a winner either way in my book. Take care hun. Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/5/2009 9:41:00 AM
Deirdre - this is certainly a wonderfully penned haiku that offers the reader great depth into the beauty of the picture - best wishes in the contest - God Bless, mj
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Date: 9/3/2009 4:41:00 AM
Wishing you the best in Raul's contest with this excellent Haiku Deirdre. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/2/2009 10:53:00 PM
Great descriptive haiku , Deirdre , in perfect 5~7~5 flow . Best of luck in the contest ..
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Date: 9/2/2009 3:39:00 PM
Nice use of sight and sound imagery for creative view. Sounds like a lovely scene. Good luck in the contest. Karen
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Date: 9/2/2009 2:34:00 PM
God speed in the competition. Very creative and descriptive. Sara
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Date: 9/2/2009 2:27:00 PM
Thanks for the support Deirdre...Raul
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