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Woodlands

Haiku competition for Raul Moreno  (as per his photograph submitted)





Brambles cloaked with green
Spring sunlight gleams through the trees
Wood thrush in full song.

naturehaiku

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Eiken Laan

Date: 1/9/2011 7:51:00 AM

Beautiful haiku Deirdre:))

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/23/2009 3:36:00 AM

Congratulations on being a first round survivor Deirdre and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/21/2009 4:51:00 PM

simply charming..congrad's on your win! Light 7 Love

P Sheart

Date: 12/21/2009 9:38:00 AM

Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/20/2009 2:00:00 PM

Excellent haiku! Congratulations on moving to the next round, Deirdre! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 12/20/2009 11:38:00 AM

Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James

John Freeman

Date: 11/8/2009 11:59:00 AM

A vivid Haiku Deirdre, Congratulations on it being featured, Sincerely, Love Moses

P Sheart

Date: 11/6/2009 4:18:00 PM

Congrats on your feature write this week! Love Light Patty

James Fraser

Date: 11/2/2009 12:58:00 PM

Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James

Date: 11/2/2009 11:32:00 AM

Good use of imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/2/2009 7:43:00 AM

This makes me want to be there! Congratulations on this one being featured this week, Deirdre! ~ Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/2/2009 3:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Deirdre. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 11/2/2009 12:31:00 AM

Congrats on your featured poem this week Deirdre Rgds Brian

Brian Strand

Date: 10/3/2009 12:12:00 AM

Nice one Deirdre.thanks for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/16/2009 7:45:00 PM

very romantic take! i like it lots! Light & Love

P Sheart

Date: 9/8/2009 7:49:00 AM

Hi Deirdre I can hear the song and it's so beautiful! Love your beautifully written Haiku! Good luck in contest, a winner either way in my book. Take care hun. Love Light Truth Patricia

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/5/2009 9:41:00 AM

Deirdre - this is certainly a wonderfully penned haiku that offers the reader great depth into the beauty of the picture - best wishes in the contest - God Bless, mj

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/3/2009 4:41:00 AM

Wishing you the best in Raul's contest with this excellent Haiku Deirdre. Love, Carol

Sean Kelly

Date: 9/2/2009 10:53:00 PM

Great descriptive haiku , Deirdre , in perfect 5~7~5 flow . Best of luck in the contest ..