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Woodlands

Haiku competition for Raul Moreno  (as per his photograph submitted)





Brambles cloaked with green
Spring sunlight gleams through the trees
Wood thrush in full song.

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Eiken Laan

January 9, 2011 at 7:51 AM

Beautiful haiku Deirdre:))

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 23, 2009 at 3:36 AM

Congratulations on being a first round survivor Deirdre and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

December 21, 2009 at 4:51 PM

simply charming..congrad's on your win! Light 7 Love

P Sheart

December 21, 2009 at 9:38 AM

Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

Carolyn Devonshire

December 20, 2009 at 2:00 PM

Excellent haiku! Congratulations on moving to the next round, Deirdre! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn

James Fraser

December 20, 2009 at 11:38 AM

Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James

John Freeman

November 8, 2009 at 11:59 AM

A vivid Haiku Deirdre, Congratulations on it being featured, Sincerely, Love Moses

P Sheart

November 6, 2009 at 4:18 PM

Congrats on your feature write this week! Love Light Patty

James Fraser

November 2, 2009 at 12:58 PM

Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James

November 2, 2009 at 11:32 AM

Good use of imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Carrie Richards

November 2, 2009 at 7:43 AM

This makes me want to be there! Congratulations on this one being featured this week, Deirdre! ~ Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 2, 2009 at 3:31 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Deirdre. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

November 2, 2009 at 12:31 AM

Congrats on your featured poem this week Deirdre Rgds Brian

Brian Strand

October 3, 2009 at 12:12 AM

Nice one Deirdre.thanks for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian

Debbie Guzzi

September 16, 2009 at 7:45 PM

very romantic take! i like it lots! Light & Love

P Sheart

September 8, 2009 at 7:49 AM

Hi Deirdre I can hear the song and it's so beautiful! Love your beautifully written Haiku! Good luck in contest, a winner either way in my book. Take care hun. Love Light Truth Patricia

Michael Jordan

September 5, 2009 at 9:41 AM

Deirdre - this is certainly a wonderfully penned haiku that offers the reader great depth into the beauty of the picture - best wishes in the contest - God Bless, mj