Woodland Prism

Spring harkens the sun
Kaleidoscope of colors
harmoniously dance
Enchanting the woodland glow
An explosion of prisms pool.


5/14/12


Phyllis Babcock
for Carolyn's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 9:58 PM
So how did I miss THIS gem? I love this, Phyllis!! How are you? I am not catching up too well on comments here but will keep trying a bit longer. Luv, Andrea
Loving Iii Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 2:47 PM
a rare sight around here.
Loving Iii Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 6:18 PM
dear phyllis, i corrected my miss spelled word thanks to you
Andresen Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 4:35 PM
Like always Phyllis, lovely written poem. - Have a nice weekend to you. - Love from Norway.
Andresen Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 4:36 PM
PS. Wish you luck in contest, hope it win.
D. Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 5:25 PM
good luck in contest you rocked with this little diddy
Horsman Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 3:37 PM
i'm sure i left a comment here, Phyllis, i know i'm having problems at the moment. any how, love this Tanka that third line is a gem. harry
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May 15, 2012 at 2:33 PM
Hi Phyl! Such a colourful poem... you have truly created a 'kaleidoscope of colours!' (forgive my British spelling!!) Best wishes, Keith
Wesley Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 8:54 PM
Wonderful entry for the contest Phyl. All the best to you!
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