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10,000 wooden warriors stand tall near the river’s edge Anticipating a botanic brawl the generals make a wedge The Maples fierce and proud bark at the pernicious Pine Branching the battles boughed entrapping the venal vine *** The Aspen and the Birch alliance together they are strong The Hickory and Elm’s defiance rumble in as they prolong Shrubs and leaves pay homage to all the damaged goods Thus now left in bondage as you enter the wounded woods. Jan.11.2019 Into the woods Sponsored by: Silent One Placed 2'nd...Thank You Sorry folks for not too much participation as of late...have been battling a flu-like virus for the last two weeks...slowly gaining composure :)

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Date: 1/13/2019 6:08:00 PM
How do they do it, stand there, daily, catching both rainbows and catastrophes? Would I ever be able to endure all they go through, just for a chance tryst with the wind on a dark winter night? Enjoyed your words, made me ponder ElsaRoses
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Date: 1/13/2019 5:58:00 PM
I like this. I think we should all be like an oak- strong and immovable. (I know I have learned to be, through moments that have pushed at me, and with such force) I hate hearing that you have had the flu. I am happy that you are feeling some better. I see that you have won in this contest, along with many others. Congratulations my dear friend. Love and Strength. ~ Brandy
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Date: 1/13/2019 8:12:00 AM
Hi WW, First of all I want to say. I hope you get well soon. Nice photo and song to accompany your well written verse. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/13/2019 7:40:00 AM
I like your use of rhymes, especially when you use words others many not.. I hope you are feeling better..Congrats on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 1/12/2019 12:18:00 PM
This is so cool.
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Date: 1/12/2019 7:37:00 AM
Well done my friend--wonderful sights and sounds in your poem..best for a win, WW. Hope you feel better soon.
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Date: 1/11/2019 11:28:00 PM
Beautiful imagery; good luck in the contest. So sorry you have been sick. I understand and it is awful!
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Date: 1/11/2019 8:53:00 PM
The trees have withstood man's onslaughts for centuries. Beautifully written WW, smoothly flowing with a reverence for nature
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Date: 1/11/2019 8:12:00 PM
Oh, my awesome bro bro, this is a wondrous creation in your usual high standard of lush imagery and rhymes. Your poetic artistry never fails you! I'm so sorry to hear you haven't been feeling so well as of late.. sending you healing prayers and well wishes for improved health via Unicorn Express.. you should receive them shortly.. Best wishes for a win! Love and hugs, my bro bro.. your sane sissy, Illum <3
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Date: 1/11/2019 4:46:00 PM
Excellent WW! I love how you wrote this. Good luck in the contest :)
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