Wooded Waters

Autumn colors fall into the somber lake.
Ribbons and stripes of red, orange and green.
Trees claustrophobic, surround wee house.
Kodachrome toppling into wooded waters.

House of mirth, blending frame and shutters.
Luminous white and gray in mid-lake flutters.

Lovely and serene, psychedelic hues.
Lone couple on outside swing and sighing.
The surround effect of burnt leaves and pines,
Cozy in a tartan blanket and quiet chat.

House of mirth, blending frame and shutters.
Luminous white and gray in mid-lake flutters.

The scent of pine mixed with autumnal mix.
A lift of spirits, not unlike unfolding flowers.
The creak of chains binds the lovers' hearts.
Memories abound and link with the present.

House of mirth, blending frame and shutters.
Luminous white and gray in mid-lake flutters.
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Rodgers Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 8:40 AM
Dear Kim, ” feels like stepping into a memory that’s half dream, half photograph, where color and scent and sound blur into something sacred. Oh the beauty of autumn, the intimacy of quiet companionship, and the way nature holds our stories without judgment. It’s a place I want to return to. Autumn Blessings, Dear Kim, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 6:30 PM
I am so glad that this imagery made you dreamy… Hugs
Greenhough Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 8:23 PM
Beautiful scene. I like the comfortable country setting. Yes, autumn is here.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 6:40 AM
Thank you, Hilda!
Rolland Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 2:39 AM
enjoyed the subtle lines and images, merci poet
Rodrigues Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 5:20 AM
Merci Beaucoup, mon ami!
Buhagiar Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 2:33 AM
Beautiful rhyme. Wonderful poem with beautiful refrain.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 5:21 AM
Thank you, dear Victor!
Hind Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 6:26 PM
This is such a great poem, Kim, wow !! I love that refrain "House of mirth, blending frame and shutters. Luminous white and gray in mid-lake flutters." It almost seems like aging, maybe not right but...that's what I get. Trees aging, house aging, couple aging...a quiet acceptance...with a twist, haunting !! <3
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 7:23 PM
Thank you, Paige!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 6:00 PM
fabulous imagery...a most captivating poem. especially liked :="Trees claustrophobic, surround wee house. Kodachrome toppling into wooded waters." I, too, am fascinated with trees
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 7:23 PM
Thank you! Here’s to trees!
Loving Iii Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 5:09 PM
Living in the desert I miss the trees. This was a wonderful reminder of what I'm missing.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 5:12 PM
I love my trees! The desert is interesting too! Thank you, John!
Leake Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 9:29 AM
Enjoyed your verse Kim Nicely done Best wishes Kevin
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 1:56 PM
Thank you, Kevin!
Goldsmith Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 9:09 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Wooded Waters" write/story. "Good Luck" If for a contest. Have a blessed day writing away..............
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 1:57 PM
Thank you, Paula!
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