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Wood Carving

Wood Carving


He sits there, not quite motionless, for
even the comfortable must alter their
perception occasionally, frozen stare
upon a craggy visage, tiny fox-like predator
eyes peering into your soul.  “What are his
origins?” ask the bespectacled intellectuals.
“Who is he?” and “Why has he taken up
his unwelcome residence here?”  The buses
pass carrying workers, students, captains
of industry. They look at him but they do
not see him.  The children see him.
Wonder in their dreams how he came
to be.  Some want to be rid of him.
They have no reason, no justification
for alarm, nothing to warrant their
uneasiness.  One daring young lady
sat beside him, whispered a secret to
him, both shook with laughter.
Passersby were startled to see the
interaction and summoned the
the childs mother.  “What have you
taught her that makes her think that
she can do such things?”  They asked.
The young lady tried to speak but was
hushed by the serious looks she was
getting from the adults.  That evening at
bed time the young lady’s mother asked
her: “What did you say to him?”.  “I said:
‘You look like grandpa.”.  The mother sat
back, quieting a tear, and reminded the
young lady that her Grandpa was no
longer here.  “I know, Mommy”.  She said.
Well then, what did “he” say to you?”
The young lady sat up in bed and smiled
“He said that he was there every day,
and any time I wished to sit with him
and read to him it would be fine.”
“Mommy”, she said, “do you remember
grandpa”?  “You know …how his face was
all rough, and his hands hard and
spidery, and how he would like it when
I sat with him and read?”  The tear that
had been held “quiet” made a sound,
ran down the mother’s face as she
hugged her daughter and put her
to bed.  The next day mother and daughter
walked to the old tree, felt the roughness
of his face, touched his spidery thin
branches, sat with him – and read.
Soon others came to visit, sitting and
whispering, laughing and reading.
for they know who he is, what his
origins are, why “he” waits so patiently.


John G. Lawless
9/27/2014

For PD's WHATEVER - Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Smith Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 7:50 PM
Excellent story with terrific meaning....congrats Tim
Lawless Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 9:30 PM
Thank you Tim
Yvonne Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 12:36 PM
Wow, I just love this John, very touching. Congratulations on your win. This is a Fav for me!
Lawless Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 9:29 PM
Maurice, your "Fav" is a melodious "BRAVO", thank you.
Allison Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 8:58 AM
a beautifully penned tale many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
Lawless Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 9:27 PM
Thanks Jan, I've always loved the trees...probably was a druid in a previous sojourn on the earth....
Kayode Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 8:46 AM
Congrats on your big win John,have a lovely Weekend....huggs
Lawless Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 9:25 PM
Thanks for stopping by to comment.
A   Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 10:18 PM
John, Congratulations! Thank you for supporting one of the MANY contest I held last year. I enjoyed reading every entry in this very odd contest OF MINE:):):). Stop by my latest blog "BLINDFOLDED" if you'd like or have the time. Always & Forever *LINDA*
Lawless Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 9:25 PM
Hey, PD, always a pleasure to enter your contest as the muse is always in need of a little inspirational tickling.
Onclaud Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 7:37 PM
well-told tale from a perceptive mind and heart, john.. a real beauty!.. hugs.. SOUPIE MAIL
Lawless Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 7:28 AM
Nette, coming from you those comments take on the air of high praise. thank you for your continued support, insight, and input.
Thirtyseven Avatar
October 31, 2014 at 4:32 AM
love those opening lines, especially about needing to alter perceptions. And an ending that grabs one by their heart. Well penned my friend.
Lawless Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 7:27 AM
Thank you Scott, I often see things, places, that remind me of moments spent with those can no longer visit them with me. So the muse and I visit them.
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