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Won'T You Be My Dream Date

Meet me on the other side with strawberries and wine take me on a fanfare ride, closer than the stars and moon Light the evening sky for me be my candle in the wind loose my senses make me tilt and swoon as you draw me in, then draw me out. Inside this love cocoon for two a lovely dream must bloom for if I wake then you'll be gone too soon. Hide me like a bride on a wedding night of silk place a kiss upon my lips, I'll pretend I'm wide awake take me to the brook be my decanter of milk I'd rather stay asleep for goodness sake with eyes enclosed, I can pretend that your the wave and I'm the shore and together we will sleep, forever more. January 21, 2023

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Date: 2/21/2023 11:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A very romantic write/picture. Have a blessed day.........................
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Date: 1/23/2023 4:10:00 AM
Your poem is exhilarating Miss Mystic! :)
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Date: 1/23/2023 4:46:00 AM
Thank you Clifford for enjoying the poem
Date: 1/22/2023 6:08:00 AM
You paint romantic environment for a dream date--wishing for the eternal. Enjoyed your poem--great ending lines.
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Date: 1/23/2023 4:46:00 AM
nice and dreamy like I like them Vijay
Date: 1/21/2023 11:12:00 PM
At the moment we have some very sweet juicy strawberries and a white chilled Chablis from France should top your bliss. Pity it's only a dream.
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Date: 1/23/2023 4:46:00 AM
sounds delectable

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