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There is a place; a road some room? town; city or Square, be it protracted or soon? I will get there" Perhaps a party? Or funeral? A wedding or wake? Or courtroom? or beach where i might contemplate? As I listen to thesis..or radio; or watch t v.? There is a Place i'm going..That today I can't see.! That does mean its not there.' Not relevant or real.' Like satan or God now.' This thought upon me just steals? If life is a test.? Just how would it seem? Almost hidden? Or quite vivid? full of lore and livestreams? Often mundane Yet with drama? mingled in; the true Love of Jesus That outweighs carnal sins? I leave you to ponder? All the above. As indeed will I too' Is there more to this life? Than apparant To our view? There are murmurs hints and witness's What? or who? Is really appealing to you?

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Date: 1/15/2025 5:05:00 AM
Hello Joe, After reading this several times, I found that it’s like a quiet yet profound conversation with the soul. The way you weave questions about life, faith, and the unseen is deeply reflective. Winter Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Joe Maverick
Date: 1/15/2025 10:51:00 AM
Well surveyed DHR.' I had hoped that it would work on many levels.? Which should be the case should i be recieving from God? I often analyise my standing before the Lord..I acknowledge my Shortcomings yet i do try to Present the way realisations come accross.'
Date: 1/14/2025 10:19:00 AM
Joe love this piece of reality in your words. He resides in us and someday we will be with him we are his sheep and his children. Love your love for Christ I will see you there with Joe someday God bless you...
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Joe Maverick
Date: 1/14/2025 1:50:00 PM
Thank You Michael for your appreciation..I hope i am of use to the Lord? A Not worthy one, serving the most worthy one.'
Date: 1/14/2025 8:30:00 AM
There is a place, nearer than one may think...and one does not have to leave this earth to experience it -- a great Son once said: "The Kingdom is at hand..." -- but we must all reach and open that entrance door together. So, until then, Christ has given us Access of Personal Revelation. I agree...the Second Coming cannot come too soon for my heart either. I join you in prayer.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/14/2025 11:59:00 AM
In His hands, in His heart, one with His spirit. Separation is our own creation.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 1/14/2025 9:03:00 AM
The Lord reigns..Joe-Dimino Fools deny it.' Yet the heavens Display the Glory of the Lord Eternity is in His hands.' All Else is chasing of the wind.'

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