Wondrous Divine Shades

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Written: August 20, 2023 ______________________________________________________________ As dawn brightens the morning skies, A gentle hand brushes the lambent horizon. Shades of gold and soft hues arise. With a touch of blue, a blush painting dawn. Cobalt night beckons, as day takes its rest. The naked moon rises, in the amber light. Lacy veils of light float in the air in the west. Teases the swelling tides with a gentle sight. Night light, a lover's secret affair As dawn brightens the morning sky. A kaleidoscope of hues, joyous treat no compare The hand of nature, a divine artist, is high. Creating a jewel of art, such a radiant scene. The dawn light chases away the cobalt night. unveiling a previously unseen fictional ravine. The sun bursts, bathing all in its warm light. The birds' melodies form a halcyon choir. The urge to live is reawakened from higher. In the wind, leaves rustle and trees sway. Whispering stories of a pristine, raw day. As the sun rises and lights the morning sky. Ample promise and hope in each fresh day. It's a shift, a transition from darkness to light. An aesthetic oeuvre of art, a breathtaking sight The finger that paints the lopsided sky creates a burst of vibrant hues to imply From mellow pastels to gold hues. Nature is an endless fountain of the muse.

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Date: 8/20/2023 7:10:00 PM
Valsa put it so eloquently. Rhymes wait to pounce from your quill. That's the way it seems. Your rhymes flow as if it's the way you voice every conversation, its so natural, never forced. Never a word used to "make do" because it rhymes. You are a true master of poetry. This is NOT an exaggeration, It's an observation !!
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Date: 8/20/2023 6:44:00 PM
"It's a shift, a transition from darkness to light. An aesthetic oeuvre of art, a breathtaking sight"..... How beautifully you have brought before our eyes that transition from darkness to light ! Rhymes wait to pounce from your quill. I often struggle to find an exact rhyme. Gifted indeed, blessed poet ! Excellent !
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