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Wondrous Day

Dark clouded skies rest heavily on a slow motion morning The slightest breeze finds me as I gaze upon this grey flannel dawn The ash and chalk dust horizon pulls my vision across a weary field, as even the trees still slumber, glistening dew coating each weary leaf Yet inside my heart is warmed by the sunshine that glows brightly because of your illuminating love, cascading upon me in blue sky affection And I say good morning beautiful in soft whispers floating far beyond the ominous heavens hoping to bring as wondrous a day to you as you do to me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/9/2016 8:33:00 AM
Gray flannel dawn! I'm gonna steal your muse. :) Love that.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/9/2016 8:52:00 AM
That's okay with me, I was just about to give it to goodwill anyway and go get a light azure blue cotton blend to replace it. :) Thanks so much Paloma.
Date: 11/7/2016 4:09:00 PM
How wonderful when the sun glows over slumberimg trees, and upon the grey whispering good morning. How lovely whem warmth reach our barren hearts..Lovely poem Chris..Now the moon dust sprinkles Goodnight :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/7/2016 4:53:00 PM
Yes, my early mornings are quiet and mostly wonderful, my time to think and meditate on love and life. Thanks you my friend. Ahhh, moon dust...good night Charmaine.
Date: 11/7/2016 7:17:00 AM
This is so sweet Chris! I sense tiredness, but refreshing love reaching you in the poem. Well written! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/7/2016 10:28:00 AM
Thank you Heidi, you sensed correctly. :) I am so happy you came by to read this one this morning and I thank you for your always kind thoughts.
Date: 11/7/2016 7:16:00 AM
Hi Chris, Your skillful pen pulled me into this beautiful scene. What I saw was just breathtaking. Well done. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 11/7/2016 10:27:00 AM
Thank you Alexis for your beautiful comment. I appreciate you stopping by this morning with such kind words.
Date: 11/7/2016 7:09:00 AM
Natural beauty mingled in intellectual beauty ... Nice ...
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Chris Green
Date: 11/7/2016 10:27:00 AM
Thank you so very much.

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